Short Story

"Her fingers gripped onto the slimy wood as she pulled herself up and over the fence. She landed on the other side with a quiet squelch. Rain trickled down her face as she ran. Sometimes she wondered why she had ever came to this god-forsaken place. Her fingers were numb with the cold and she could no longer feel her nose. Now, she couldn't tell rain drops from tears. She slammed into a cold, hard wall. She shook her head and started to climb. As she reached the top, she slipped and fell. She grabbed the edge and managed to stop herself from falling onto the ground. She grunted with the effort of hoisting herself up again. She jumped down the other side and continued to run. She tripped up and suddenly she was crying even harder. She got up and continued running, but suddenly there was a sharp pain in her chest. She peered down and to her horror, a sword was sticking out where her heart was. Her body grew numb. Something pulled the sword out and her lifeless body flopped down. The attacker brought the sword down again on her head and though her soul was long gone, her body could not help but scream..."

Woah, Deep stuff. I love the action, and the description you have used in the story. It's a nice little thriller. I hope to see more writing from you.

Jacob1486 wrote:Woah, Deep stuff. I love the action, and the description you have used in the story. It's a nice little thriller. I hope to see more writing from you.

Thanks. I like to write thrillers. I'm actually in the middle of writing a book write now. It's half thriller, half mystery.

I might use this as my short story writing piece for english class next week, lol. I'd get, like, 100%.

Crazyyoshi4 wrote:I might use this as my short story writing piece for english class next week, lol. I'd get, like, 100%.

Don't you dare! D:< Mah story! I made it up in like, two seconds, which means that it's mine! D:<

(Lol)

That was awesommmmmme. I liked taht story.

Neo789 wrote:That was awesommmmmme. I liked taht story.

Wai, thank youuuu! :3

Basketcase1 wrote:

Neo789 wrote:That was awesommmmmme. I liked taht story.

Wai, thank youuuu! :3

J00 is welcome.